Wednesday, 18 April 2012

Screenplay feedback

After sharing the screenplay with the other members of my group, a number of points were raised:
  • Addition of 1 or 2 extra scenes, to ensure the film reaches the 5-minute mark
  • Changing HATTIE's character to make her warmer towards Simon, so the audience thinks he has more of a chance with her
  • Shortening of the first scene to keep the pace satisfactory.

Other than these points, overall we were very happy with the screenplay so far.

Other issues brought up during the meeting were:

  • Locations - use of Endecliffe Park as primary location?
  • Weather - hope for sun while filming, but have to film in rain otherwise
  • Sound - recording sync sound, with the possibility of dubbing/foley if needed
  • Kit - have 3 DSLRs available, it would be nice to make use of a 2 or even 3 camera set-up
  • Actors - using our contacts we have people in mind for the characters.

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